http://casatthedisco.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] casatthedisco.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sevenswells 2010-08-09 06:53 am (UTC)

You should not apologize for the tons of OCs when they’re so well-developed. As others have already stated, the pastry chef was a highlight.

You captured the hectic pace of a kitchen well, at least based on what I’ve seen on all of those Gordon Ramsey shows.

I loved the paragraph on destruction versus creation, and how Puck learned that the latter was more satisfying. It offered a believable exhibit of what made Puck who he is in this fic.

I feel so invested in Kurt having his successful Broadway career that I feel sad that he’s retiring here. I suppose I’m intimidated by change, and I’m still looking for a dream to fulfill myself so I feel weird when I read about people who achieved their dreams but don’t want to live that life anymore. I'm also getting a sense that Kurt's fiance is playing more of a role in Kurt's decision than he's letting on. The guy seems creepy.

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