[DOUJIN] Blindfold (GacktxMiyavi)
May. 8th, 2008 04:32 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
sevenswells[edit] shit, I'm sorry, I did a wrong manip and the whole shit thing went down
Done! I'm exhausted, and it was only 5 pages (do I really want to be a comicker? Gah).
It's my first yaoi doujin ever, prease to be indulgent. Honestly, I don't think it's very good, it doesn't make much sense, but I decided to post it anyway because I've spent two days working on it and I don't want to think it was a waste of time. ;____;
So here it is, under the cut. It's strictly NC-17, so if you're a minor, you can't click.
Please don't steal or sell or use any element of the images without my permission.
This is a work of pure fiction, Gackt and Miyavi don't belong to me.
Done! I'm exhausted, and it was only 5 pages (do I really want to be a comicker? Gah).
It's my first yaoi doujin ever, prease to be indulgent. Honestly, I don't think it's very good, it doesn't make much sense, but I decided to post it anyway because I've spent two days working on it and I don't want to think it was a waste of time. ;____;
So here it is, under the cut. It's strictly NC-17, so if you're a minor, you can't click.
Please don't steal or sell or use any element of the images without my permission.
This is a work of pure fiction, Gackt and Miyavi don't belong to me.
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Date: 2008-05-08 02:56 pm (UTC)(t'as eu mon mail ? )
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Date: 2008-05-08 03:09 pm (UTC)Sinon, oui, je viens de checker mon mail. Tant pis, hein, comme on dit ^^ Merci quand même pour tout ce que tu as fait, et fuck les gros geeks de l'Epita!
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Date: 2008-05-08 03:13 pm (UTC)To think that there are also mangakas who work without assistants, like Togashi, it's... terrifying °_____°
That man is a god to me.
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Date: 2008-05-08 10:50 pm (UTC)that is really impressive! I want more!
the last page is pure love <33333333333333
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Date: 2008-05-09 03:23 am (UTC)Came here from your post on jrockyaoi... looking forward to see what you do next! ^__^<3
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Date: 2008-05-09 04:16 am (UTC)A part ça que dire à part : TROP COURT !
J'aime les noirs et gris, j'aime le dessin et les fluides, j'aime la posture de seme et la croupe de uke...
Mais c'est pas assez !
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Date: 2008-05-09 04:22 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-09 08:31 am (UTC)Merci beaucoup, très chère.
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Date: 2008-05-09 09:37 am (UTC)Next, huh... well maybe I'll try another (longer) doujin, but I have to concentrate on the translation of my Gackt/Miyavi fic from French to English beforehand. So, maybe something else in the doujin department, but not so soon, heheh ^^
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Date: 2008-05-09 09:41 am (UTC)Merci pour ton commentaire et les compliments! Lurve! ^3^
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Date: 2008-05-09 09:44 am (UTC)Les mains c'est le pire à faire... enfin en tout cas c'est ce que je déteste.
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Date: 2008-05-09 05:53 pm (UTC)ahem .. you drew that? wow .. you are really good. the anatomy proportions and all those other small technicalities that represent a bad juju to me .. you had them very well done ")
I salute you :3
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Date: 2008-05-10 02:19 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-11 02:29 am (UTC)So if you'd like I can up them one at a time or all at once? O_o;;
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Date: 2008-05-11 02:30 am (UTC)On the bright side, at least I have oC... 8D
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Date: 2008-05-11 07:59 am (UTC)you know what? I'm gonna friend you since i like stalk your page like none other xD
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Date: 2008-05-14 02:40 pm (UTC)you are talented to sad it is only 5 pages...
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Date: 2008-05-15 10:13 am (UTC)You're already finished? Oo Thank you! Didn't the grey shadowing bother you? The pages were kinda low quality too, wouldn't you prefer HQ pages without shadows?
Lemme know.
I'd love to see the result!
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Date: 2008-05-15 10:17 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-15 12:26 pm (UTC)It makes coloring easier cause then I don't have to fugly up your art by attempting to do my own...
I don't know, when I'm done, I might go over the edges of the shadows with a light blur tool though... hmmm...
And only one page so far, in the middle of the second page right now... XDD <33
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Date: 2008-05-15 09:16 pm (UTC)your sense of proportions is really commendable! i had no idea that this would be so
graphically deliciousrealistic! i thought it would be all glowing cones and glossed over parts, but it was downright dirty and raw! *rawr*i really liked gackt's expression on the second last page, so statuesque, that even having a wanton, naked miyavi going down on him didn't faze him one bit!
and of course the last frame was really sweet! *heart*
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Date: 2008-05-16 01:25 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-19 07:32 am (UTC)I really like your choice of specific images -- for example, I really like that we don't see Gackt's eyes until the penultimate page. It made me (as the reader) feel like something of Gackt was being withheld from me, so I could experience Myv's frustration more fully. I guess what I mean is that I felt like the pictures were really creating an emotional story just as the words were making a story. Even though it was only five pages long, there was a real sense of character and development.
And! It was so hot!
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Date: 2008-05-19 08:43 am (UTC)Hahaha, I guess drawing is really complicated to me too, but complicated is fine by me! Never give up, never surrender! :D
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Date: 2008-05-19 08:46 am (UTC)Nonetheless, thank you so much for commenting! :DDDD
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Date: 2008-05-19 08:48 am (UTC)Thank you very very much for commenting on this, it's super encouraging!
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Date: 2008-05-19 09:01 am (UTC)i thought it would be all glowing cones and glossed over parts, but it was downright dirty and raw! *rawr*
Hahahaha, I wish I knew how to do that (I mean it!). It's like when I'm writing, I can get very embarrassed, because sometimes I can't embellish or get by some things... so in the end it always comes out like this... but if you like, it's awesome, because it really comes from the bottom of my heart! (,,,^____^,,,) *hugs*
Thanks again, ILU!!!!
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Date: 2008-05-19 09:16 am (UTC)Even though it was only five pages long, there was a real sense of character and development.
OMG THANK YOU FOR TELLING ME THIS.
When I posted it, I was feeling post-partum depression and I used to think that this doujin was a whole load of crap (hence my comments on it at the time), but now I'm doing better, and even though I'm still not entirely satisfied, I've made friends with it eventually. ^^ The only thing I was really unsure of was whether it made sense or not. Thanks.
And! It was so hot!
Wheeee!!! \o/ Yay! Yay! Main objective accomplished!! YOSHAAAAAA!!!!
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Date: 2008-06-02 07:44 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-09 02:44 pm (UTC)A thing that I can see, but it's really stupid of me to mention, is that on Miyavi's right hand (second image Blindfold p2 + 4) the tattoo doesn't seem to be quite correct. The M is located on his ring finger, as the V is located on his index finger.
I hope you don't mind this little nagging, as I really adore this work. In my point of view, it's real art and I'm looking forward to seeing reading more of you. You'd mind it if I added you to friends? (Je peux parler un peu français aussi! *Proud*)
Don't ask me why I love it, or you'll get one big reply =P
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Date: 2008-06-09 03:52 pm (UTC)And thanks for the remark about the tattoos - actually, there are even more mistakes that I don't want point out myself because of, well, obvious reasons, but you are quite correct anyway. Haaaaa, I wanted to draw them because I considered it was essential to the whole "Miyavi" character, but then it got more and more difficult and tedious with each frame, so in the end I kinda gave up and ended up cursing those tattoos that, other than that, I find quite beautiful ^^;;;
I'm planning to draw a longer GacktxMiyavi doujin in the very near future, adapted from a fic by
Bien sûr que tu peux m'ajouter sur ta liste d'amis, you're welcome! :D
Thanks again!
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Date: 2008-06-09 05:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-09 10:05 pm (UTC)I believe the tattoos are a pain in the ass, and they actually look very, very realistic. The MYV thing just kinda jumped into the eye, because first, well, his hand's on an interesting ... body part, and tattoos on fingers have always interested me.
If you finish the doujin, please, drop me a line 'cause I'll be more than happy to check it out.
Can I try and colour it too (just for fun), as I'm desperately trying to avoid any studying for my examinations x.X