OMG!!!! *shallow breathes* I can't breathe!!! I can't think! I can't do anything but throw myself at your feet and worship you! *proceeds to do just that*
You have such a way with words!!!! *points accusingly at you while simultaneously clinging to your leg* ARGH!!! I don't even know what to say!!!
I'm wracking my brain to find the words to say how much I love this! I must say though, the thing I loved best, I think, is that although this is the end, it doesn't feel like the end! There's just so much room for possibility! And I love that you ended this fic that way!
How on earth did you come up with this?!?! All that stuff about love? GENIUS! Genius, I tell you! Gackt IS such a morbid freak! I love that he was willing to sacrifice all, using those three little words, to get Miyavi back my his side.
And that changes EVERYTHING! The whole of the relationship dynamics has shifted! Even just looking at this chapter, how Gackt starts off all smooth and suave, with an arrogance that just won't quit! Then gets reduced to babbling incoherently, almost to the point of pleading, begging Miyavi to understand where he's coming from, whereas Miyavi's transformation is completely opposite, until he's the one catching the tears of the other with his fingertips! So beautiful, this image you've painted!
You've put all the pieces together so elegantly, your characters have depths that I doubt even THEY know of! Seeing Miyavi through Gackt's eyes was especially refreshing, I could really feel the intensity of his feelings through his assessment! It was heart stopping!
I'm not even kidding you, I had to physically brace myself to read this chapter, I was (still am!) so excited!
Strange thing though, I haven't been around for awhile, and first thought was how freakin' lucky I was that you finished the fic in my absence and that I had a whole bunch of chapters to read in a row! I mean, I'm still super lucky, but I actually didn't zoom through them like I thought I would, impatient to get to the end. I found myself making up random excuses, putting it off by writing disabled comments, rereading chapters, almost ...lingering to prolong the experience!
And what an experience it has been! Hahah, I laugh at myself now, but it was really as if by delaying reading the last chapter, it wasn't actually over! Silly me! But it had to be done! There was no way I could go any longer without knowing whether they both got their Happy Ending or not, but it was well worth the wait!
But enough of this! I LOVE IT! EVERYTHING ABOUT IT!!!!
These last chapters, especially, I feel really gave this fic shape, as odd as that sounds! This was such a fun journey! Surely not good for my heart, randomly stopping and starting, and going faster and slower, as your writing is prone to make it do, but most surely, completely, worth the heartache!
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Date: 2009-01-14 05:47 pm (UTC)You have such a way with words!!!! *points accusingly at you while simultaneously clinging to your leg* ARGH!!! I don't even know what to say!!!
I'm wracking my brain to find the words to say how much I love this! I must say though, the thing I loved best, I think, is that although this is the end, it doesn't feel like the end! There's just so much room for possibility! And I love that you ended this fic that way!
How on earth did you come up with this?!?! All that stuff about love? GENIUS! Genius, I tell you! Gackt IS such a morbid freak! I love that he was willing to sacrifice all, using those three little words, to get Miyavi back my his side.
And that changes EVERYTHING! The whole of the relationship dynamics has shifted! Even just looking at this chapter, how Gackt starts off all smooth and suave, with an arrogance that just won't quit! Then gets reduced to babbling incoherently, almost to the point of pleading, begging Miyavi to understand where he's coming from, whereas Miyavi's transformation is completely opposite, until he's the one catching the tears of the other with his fingertips! So beautiful, this image you've painted!
You've put all the pieces together so elegantly, your characters have depths that I doubt even THEY know of! Seeing Miyavi through Gackt's eyes was especially refreshing, I could really feel the intensity of his feelings through his assessment! It was heart stopping!
I'm not even kidding you, I had to physically brace myself to read this chapter, I was (still am!) so excited!
Strange thing though, I haven't been around for awhile, and first thought was how freakin' lucky I was that you finished the fic in my absence and that I had a whole bunch of chapters to read in a row! I mean, I'm still super lucky, but I actually didn't zoom through them like I thought I would, impatient to get to the end. I found myself making up random excuses, putting it off by writing disabled comments, rereading chapters, almost ...lingering to prolong the experience!
And what an experience it has been! Hahah, I laugh at myself now, but it was really as if by delaying reading the last chapter, it wasn't actually over! Silly me! But it had to be done! There was no way I could go any longer without knowing whether they both got their Happy Ending or not, but it was well worth the wait!
But enough of this! I LOVE IT! EVERYTHING ABOUT IT!!!!
These last chapters, especially, I feel really gave this fic shape, as odd as that sounds! This was such a fun journey! Surely not good for my heart, randomly stopping and starting, and going faster and slower, as your writing is prone to make it do, but most surely, completely, worth the heartache!
Looking forward to what the future brings!!!
Cheers, Babe!