Okay. First off, I loved the introduction of Puck's crew. I thought the group was realistically varied, and each person made up an important part of the group dynamic. I especially loved Jeoff, not only because he reminded me a bit of myself, but because you (thankfully) didn't model each and every one of Puck's crew after Gordon Ramsay (but damn is he hot). I liked the personalities you gave each of them, especially Frédo. (: I also appreciated the Frenchman's heavily-accented dialogue. I don't know--for some reason, seeing "zis" and "ah, fuck, what do you call it? Romarin?" made me pleased beyond all words. ♥
And then came the food. Fuck me with a ten-foot pole, you're a Puck/Kurt shipper-slash-foodie's wet dream incarnate! (I hope the amuse bouche for chapter two includes a macaron recipe? Pretty please with sugar-glaze on top? :3)
I liked the minute peek into Kurt's life; I had forgotten Kurt went by the stage-name "Evan," but once I remembered, I was cool. Haha. And I really, really liked Puck being squicked out by Kurt's performance. ("There was only so much campiness he could face...") It made his personality pop, and it beat Puck glaring at the two on-stage wishing he was the one being serenaded by Kurt/Evan. (Even if I like to think that Puck was. xD)
The ending was the sucker-punch exclamation point to finish up this epic piece. I had to grin, because the scathing comment was just so Kurt in nature.
Amazing job! I really can't wait to find out more about Burt. And, of course, I can't wait for more Puck, more Puck/Kurt (soon, yes?), and FOOD. ♥ ♥
Keep up the awesome, mon cherie! (I didn't just call you something offensive, did I? I don't think I forgot that much of my French in the years since I've taken formal lessons, haha.)
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Date: 2010-08-08 06:37 pm (UTC)I liked the personalities you gave each of them, especially Frédo. (: I also appreciated the Frenchman's heavily-accented dialogue. I don't know--for some reason, seeing "zis" and "ah, fuck, what do you call it? Romarin?" made me pleased beyond all words. ♥
And then came the food.
Fuck me with a ten-foot pole, you're a Puck/Kurt shipper-slash-foodie's wet dream incarnate! (I hope the amuse bouche for chapter two includes a macaron recipe? Pretty please with sugar-glaze on top? :3)
I liked the minute peek into Kurt's life; I had forgotten Kurt went by the stage-name "Evan," but once I remembered, I was cool. Haha. And I really, really liked Puck being squicked out by Kurt's performance. ("There was only so much campiness he could face...") It made his personality pop, and it beat Puck glaring at the two on-stage wishing he was the one being serenaded by Kurt/Evan. (Even if I like to think that Puck was. xD)
The ending was the sucker-punch exclamation point to finish up this epic piece. I had to grin, because the scathing comment was just so Kurt in nature.
Amazing job! I really can't wait to find out more about Burt. And, of course, I can't wait for more Puck, more Puck/Kurt (soon, yes?), and FOOD. ♥ ♥
Keep up the awesome, mon cherie! (I didn't just call you something offensive, did I? I don't think I forgot that much of my French in the years since I've taken formal lessons, haha.)